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Friday 20 October 2017

musical madness Recount

Musical Madness Recount

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Write a recount about the immersion assembly. You will write at least 3 paragraphs about the event.

Paragraph 1: Going to the assembly and how you felt.
Paragraph 2: What happened at the assembly. (commas and questions marks can add extra paragraphs here).
Paragraph 3: Leaving the assembly and how you felt, what were your favourite parts.

Remember to: Use time connective, detail, similes and speech. Quality writing has variety!


Start Writing here:

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This morning I walk with my class to the hall. When we sat down we saw Mr J With  crazy close on him.   Mr  Burt and Mrs nus was singing a song called Musical madness and there were items it was team by team. My Favorited movie was team four   because it was because   the songs was my Favorited songs to play and team fives movie it was cool because they were eating popcorn and they were pretending to be a family.  They were watching a movie the kids were  scared so they told their dad  to turn  it off then there were songs playing to. Then team five was on the stage and we was saw Mr Burt and Mrs nus singing a song  for us   
  

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